Thursday, February 1, 2007
Once upon a time in a galaxy far far away... Two boys lay side by side in the middle of the blackest night there had been during that winter. One was larger than the other and had red hair. The other was a little taller than average and had dark hair. Both were completly covered in dark, thick, clothing. "Micah what the heck is taking them so long to attack we've been waiting here for 30 minutes. "Yeah well at least they're keeping us on our toes" replied Micah. Jacob, the dark haired boy, looked out over the huge tire that hide them from enemy snipers view. Phhffffiiiittttt!!! Thuuunnnkk!!! two paintballs smacked into the tire right next to Jacob's armored helmet. "Get down everybody!!!" Jacob yelled. "Well looks like their making their move!!" Micah yelled. Jacob quickly peeked over the tire. Ten paintballs exploded over the tire. "Looks like we're gonna have to give them a few!" said Jacob. "Right then lets give em' a taste boys!!!" Micah hollered. The two ran over to the defense position. Five other boys were firing off their weapons at the dark figures moving closer to their flag. Jacob and Micah fired off a few rounds at the enemy paintballers. To be continued
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6 comments:
the suspension is killing me! look forward to reading the rest!!
Thanks for putting me in! Can I ip of a guys head next? Jake, another thing my opinions and who I tell them to are none of your concern!
Nice start
Dude write the end!
Cool story!!!
Change the guns 2 plasma guns!!!
it will be way better!!!
I like like your story and you should put in like, and puctuation
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